ግስ – መረጸ ኣስመላሽ
ስም ተውላጠ ስም - ቅጽል ዘማእከለ ካብ ሕጊ ሰዋሱው - “ግስ” ዝፈንቀለ ብርኺ ካብን ናብን - ዓዲ ዘውዕለ ብርሃን ዝጎደሎ - ኣዒንቲ ዕንጕለ ብጽላሉ ዝምካሕ - ቃንጥሻ እጕለ ግስ መስተጻመር - ኣንጊሆም ምስ ወጹ ብቓልኣጋኖ - ዝነብር ኣጊጹ ሓንቲ ከይሓዘ - እግሪ
ስም ተውላጠ ስም – ቅጽል ዘማእከለ
ካብ ሕጊ ሰዋሱው – “ግስ” ዝፈንቀለ
ብርኺ ካብን ናብን – ዓዲ ዘውዕለ
ብርሃን ዝጎደሎ – ኣዒንቲ ዕንጕለ
ብጽላሉ ዝምካሕ – ቃንጥሻ እጕለ
ግስ መስተጻመር – ኣንጊሆም ምስ ወጹ
ብቓልኣጋኖ – ዝነብር ኣጊጹ
ሓንቲ ከይሓዘ – እግሪ ከም ኣረነ
ሰኣን ሚእቲ ይብል – ከም ዓራጃጂነ
ንፋስ ስግር ባሕሪ – ንርሑቅ ከማዕዱ
በረካ ሰፊሩ – መሮሮ ለሚዱ
ብሕልሚ ዝዛወር – ኣካል ብድቅሱ
ሰኣን ምብርባር – ጠፍእዎ ፈውሱ
ኮፍ ምስ መረጸ – እግሩ እንዳቀየደ
ነብሱ ፍርፍር ኢሉ – ከም ስጋ ዝተሓርደ
ንፍርፍርታ’ውን – ሃሎዋት ኢልዎ
ኣቱም ሰብ ኣእምሮ – እስኪ ፍረድዎ
ሰባዓታት ኣትዩ – ሓሊፉ ንኣርብዓ
ገና ብሕዝሉ – ከም ተወልደ ቖልዓ
ሞት መሪጹ – ከም ቑርዲድ ጠቢቁ
ክሳብ ዝመጽእዎ – እቶም ዝጣበቁ
መንእሰይ ኣጆካ – ወንካ ኣይተህድም
ሃገር እኮ የብላን – ብዘይካካ ትርጉም
ዝጽመር ጸሚርካ – እግርካ “ኣገስግሶ”
ዝጠፍኤ ህዝብካ – ናብ ቤቱ ምለሶ
ኣይ ንሓደን ንኩልና
ርሑስ በዓል ምስጋና
ግስ (verb) = action
መረጸ ኣስመላሽ November 23, 2016
PH November 27, 2016
I would say, the best poem of the year 2016. Let all of us for action no time for discussion. time is running out.
Simon G. November 27, 2016
ይበል ግጥሚ – ኣቶ መረጸ!
ኣሎ ዶ ትብል ኢኻ – ካብዚ ዝበለጸ
ኣጠቓቕማ ቃላት – ኮነ ሓረጋት ብክኢላ ዝተመርጸ
ከም ሕሉፍ ነዳቓይ – ኩርናዕ እምኒ ዝቐረጸ
ከም በሊሕ መላጸ!
ከምዝመስለኒ ግን – ግስዶ ትብሎ ተሳኢኑ
ግስ ደኣ መሊኡ!
የግዳሰ ብምንታይ ዓይነት – “ተውሳከግስ” ተጀኒኑ
ኣይ ንላዕሊ – ኣይንታሕቲ ዘዕነኑ
መኣዝን ስኢኑ
እንታይሞ ክንብል – ናትና ኾይኑ
Fithi November 27, 2016
Really beautiful and timely poem by brother Meretse Asmelash.
And more beautiful follow up or continuation by brother Simon G.
This is what we really miss on asena good people entertaining & educating us at the same time.
Fithi November 27, 2016
Thank thank you both brothers.
Wedi Fre November 30, 2016
Great Poem from Mereze and even greater comment from Simon G.
Bravo Dekebat!!
Let us act now if not now the we are extending the pain and agony of our people.
Meretse Asmelash December 1, 2016
Thank you to all of you.
Meretse Asmelash December 3, 2016
Dear brother Simon G
I have not forgotten your encouraging comments in the form of poem. But since I felt I am less qualified for that I have felt to pass your honest and compassion coments to all authors, media professionals, artists ( which of course that includes you) as well as to anyone who loves and respects every human being in our world.
I also would like to tell you for presenting the other side of verb or action. you said:-……
ግስ ደኣ መሊኡ!
የግዳሰ ብምንታይ ዓይነት – “ተውሳከግስ” ተጀኒኑ
ኣይ ንላዕሊ – ኣይንታሕቲ ዘዕነኑ
መኣዝን ስኢኑ
እንታይሞ ክንብል – ናትና ኾይኑ
“ግስ ደኣ መሊኡ”! ..We have plenty of actions but it is all “The Bad” or The Agaly”. That is very impressive. The main reason why skipped adverb was because an adverb has no life without verb. I also had couple calls from readers asking me what happened to prposition? The answer for them is I have not skipped preposition it is there.
ብርኺ ካብን ናብን – ዓዲ ዘውዕለ
to and from are preposition or preposistional phrase as a whole.
Anyways, the power of our word, which is the same as our intent, or wish, faith is trapped inside our hard structure of beliefs. We can dream whatever we want to but not without awareness which really is the center piece of making a difference through an action.
Wheter it is positive or negative a feedback is very essential to any writer.
Thank you again
Simon G. December 4, 2016
Hi Brother Meretse,
My intention was to provoke you (and internally appreciate your talent).
Reason for that: to simply gain more of the secrete juice. You are as unique of as rare metals and anything comes out of your rich brain is a huge gain to us. I will leave you with this:
ዘየስተውዓልኩ – ዶ መስለካ
‘ት ሚስጥራዊ – መልእኽትኻ
ኣየ ኣቶ መረጸ!
መልእኽቱ ዝተመርጸ
ካብ ዝሓሸ – ንላዕሊ ዝተመርጸ
ካብ መምህራኑ ዝበለጸ
ካበይ ከ መጸ?
ካበይ ከምዝመጸስ – ይጽንሓልና
እዚ ሃብሮም ናትና!
ሓበን ኩላትና
ግደፍ: በጃኻ: ግደፍ – ከይተዛርበና
ኣንታ ኣርካን ሃገርና!
ናትና ምዃንካ ኮሪዕና